Beta Reader Services

For each chapter, I will address the strong points and areas that need clarification. Secondly,  I will provide a comprehensive editorial letter on:

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• Organization of chapters: Do they need to be rearranged?

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• POV: Is it consistent? Is a different POV more appropriate?

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• Settings and descriptions: What role do they play in your story?

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• Dialogue: Is it consistent?

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• Character development: At the outset, what is the lie that the protagonist believes? What truths are they setting out to find? In the end, are all their internal and external conflicts resolved?

• Major themes and conflicts: Are there too many? Too few? Are they clear?

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• Plot holes

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